Comments : You were

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    If thats not you best your going into my favorites...

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem, i really like how you have written it so well.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great poem, really sad, 5/5 you'll get better. you'll feel filled again.

    PLP~ Lil slam~ hugs & love

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    So powerful and emotional, I know the feelings you are going through!!! I feel like this every day...Love this poem, i truely do, something I can relate to!!! hope that you are ok???

    *Lova Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    this was really great and sad. i really really know exactly how you feel. Take care.
    Lovez ya
    Samz]]

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    hey, thx for rating my poems, and yea im aight thx so much for caring :D and i know a few guys like the one in ur poem haha. i think it was very beautifully written. it got slightly confusing towards the middle where he was all bad and sad..because it begins to seem like you are the sad but then all of a sudden its him....i think it just needs thinking about haha. or maybe im thinking too much. lol. i rele liked this though. 5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    sigh, i need to start remembering im not freak anymore lol im ~Death's Embrace~...actually nevermind im going back to Freak LOL i change my mind tooooo much
    ~Freak~