Just awesome poem, 5/5. Thanks for commenting on mine. I am always on here. Drop me a line sometime.

Your mean! if u dont love sum 1 tell them dont ignore them.

I really like your work, but unfortunately there are too many out there that don't understand the beauty of a non-rhyming poem so rich with words that it seems to flow perfectly anyway...Yes, I think this one will be pinned to my cork board...I have only ever tried one non-rhyming poem, titled 'death laughs at me' which I would love you to read, but you have inspired me to write more. Tnankyou.