Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

amazing write, i love it!

i get what your saying, :) things in life are just confusing on of what to say to people sometimes and what you should do.

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs and love

good job!

This is so amazing, perfect!!! you have so much talent girl, I love all of your poems!!! Very well written, judt keep your head up high!!

*Love Sabrina*

THis poem is great and it reminds me of what I thought was going to happen with my ex and me. keep writing!!

VERY WELL WRITTEN!!! I like how u divide his and your thoughts, wouldn't have thought of that...hey from the commet u left on FAKE OUT, i hope things are goin ok 4 u. If they're not u can always talk 2 me i'm not goin anywhere. SO MUCH PEACE SO MUCH LUV 4 U, //ari\\ :)