by *Amanda* Apr 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Today I woke up and had a choice, |
You have really good ideas and thoughts that have the ability to write an awesome poem...u just need 2 work on ur rhythm and lay out that makes it flow smoother! other than that i think that ur themes and reasonings in ur poems r some of the best i have read of! |