Comments : Thoughts of a Killer

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    David this makes you seem psychotic.I don't think I should sit next to you in the library anymore.Lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    yes it worked! awesome write!

  • 19 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    yee it worked. good one though... keep it up man

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    great job. love the rhyming scheme. it was classed under dark poetry and thats what it portrayed.glad you aint psychotic though

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Makes you sound a little crazy but I reallt don't think you are! I have to say that was very good! Brooke

    Hey I will go with you if you read my new poem Set Free! Thanx I would appreciate it! Thanx! Keep up the good work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rozzy

    wicked poem it got chills running up spine.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    So evil, you are a great writer, really had me hooked! Keep it up!
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by derp

    its cool

  • 19 years ago

    by -LydaRose-

    Yes, it worked, but may I suggest something? Your last word, furry, I think you should change it to 'fury'. :)
    Nice work, keep it up
    -LydaRose-

  • 19 years ago

    by Jasmin

    wow it really did work good job!
    good luck
    ~JaSmIn~

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    Excellent use of Imagery. I felt like i was constructing the murder... I loved it! One of the best murder poetry on the web
    ~Hina

  • 19 years ago

    by Ari

    Yes. It worked very well.

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Interesting and thanks for the note at the bottom i now feel so much better commenting:) I liked it even though dark poetry is not really my scene....I agree bout adding a little bit of flow as that will really having people captivated and afraid!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robiie

    great poem, very evilish...worked great !

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    yes i worked!!!!! cool poem some poems let yea wander but this kept me glued to the screen.....5 x)

  • 19 years ago

    by Meagan

    good job yeah you got ur evil poem down pat lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Yes it worked !!!
    I loves it just loved it
    keep it up
    I love how you write is so awesome
    I love how this poem could paint a picture in my head .
    April

  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    yea it worked it sounds really evil ive had those feelings were i just want to go crazy on someone n kill but i hold back im not ccrazy just really short tempered

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Indeed it did work...very well I would say. You've got quite a talent for sounding like a malicious, wicked, killer...I wouldn't have thought you were actually psychotic...but you entered the mind of a killer well...

    xxx