i really cant say how amazing that was, lost for words. you are such a fantastic poet with so so so much talent, wow. keep ya chin up hun and take care, lu -x-x-x-

So beautiful Toni. I'm not really sure what to make of it, but I think each reader will interpret it into something they feel, resulting in eveyrone being able to 'relate.' I doubt this was your intention, but it's a clever poem.

I hope everything's okay. I'm still very much here for you. Love yoop.

Take good care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

AMAZING poem hun!!! i'm worried about you though becuase its reli sad... i hope you are ok hun xxxxxxx see you l8a!!!! LOVE YOU!

wow thats is amazing, awesome, excellent, so good, i loved the first lines,
"Every breath is twisted…in-to a desperate cry
And I know that if you felt the wind, you’d only want to fly"
That really caught my attention and you managed to keep it throughout, stunning poem, worth more than a five any day,
all ma luv,
ellie
xxx

Thanku xxxx