by ---AL--- Apr 13, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Broken Friendship |
oh very good, like u r watching from afar... |
by Mandy Lou
This was a great write...Nice rhyme, though Hold and Hand don't really rhyme...Nicely done, I'm sure that many can relate! |
Excellent. Very nice flow, word choice, and message. Very well done. |
by Natalie84
Beautifull written. I loved the way it flowed and the message was divine. Broken friendship can be painful though. Excellent write my friend. :) |
by girlii797
NICE!!! it hit me right in the heart. |