Comments : Broken Dreams

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Amazing write Toni hun, but I'm so worried about you right now. I hope everything's okay munchkin. I love you.

    Please take good care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great write!

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    i'm a bit worried hun :S can i help? Amazing poem hunni xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    another great poem, really liked the lines
    All my dreams have been turned, inside and upside down
    And still you ask me everyday, why I wear this frown

    i hope you are ok, take care always, lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    wow, awesome awesome, i cant describe how much i loved it. u got sum really different rhymes there and i just loved it, perfect completely!
    always here,
    ellie
    xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku every1 xxx