Comments : Mood swings

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Loved it. beautiful descriptions, loved the metaphor "yellow smiles".
    I'd love to see you write a specific type of poetry- ie. sonnet, haiku, clarity pyramid etc. I think your short style of powerful wording would definetely work well with it.
    this is one of your best latest poems- kudos to you! It was a beautiful and unique piece.