excellent theme expressed well from presonal experience good job

Great poem! 5/5! keep it up.. please check out my poem "I wanted everything" and "Without wings" please comment/rate it would mean so much to me =) *hugs*

WOW! Very good job! You are really talented! Keep it up hun! ~5/5~

Excellent write, Bec. very well done.
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

The poem itself is great but I do have some feedback I hope your not offended by and can work with...just be aware of grammar and capitalisation of your words in your poem - its nothing that can't be edited - if you need a hand let me know if not just keep up the good work
Much Love One Love Eirisa

Amazing poem with great emotion. Another great job keep it up! Another 5/5! Take Care! Brooke

thats sad. very good though. great job
~keep it up~ 5/5

-no more

Brilliantly written, i like it alot...
I can feel the emotions you put into the poem...
definitely a 5...
All the best to you...
;-)

this poem was great. it was kinda sad.

I don't think this is your best, but I appriciate the thought behind the poem.

Sorry, but I'd have to give ya a 4 on this one...slang terms just sorta kill the meaning of a poem. (to me. Just remember this is just my opinion...)

I feel you on that one.. muy bien!! I can relate totally!! MWUAH!