My Suicide

by >> Beautifully Mistaken   Apr 14, 2005


I hurt myself today,
to see if i still feel.
To see if the pain inside,
is still real.

Always and forever this pain will stay,
deep inside; it runs through my veins.
A broken heart,
along with tear stains.

This pain makes my heart beat,
but with each beat came a story.
My last story,
was the only one i found glory.

Every story has a start,
maybe with a razor blade and feeling a little bit numb.
Every story has an end,
but that is soon to come.

I found my razor blade,
and put it to my wrist.
I prayed that this would be the end,
and gave it a swift twist.

This is where my story comes to an end,
the blood stained the carpet as i slowly died.
But i left one thing,
the story of my suicide.

Votes and comments are very much appreciated and they help so much. thanks tanz xox

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  • 19 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Hey I like this poem and i know how you feel. I used to cut myself and yeah scars last forever while the pain but go away..
    -Rachel-

  • 19 years ago

    by lover girl

    about a year ago i went suicidely insain i know how you feel but cutting your rist wont help cuz the pain still there in the end. and all you'll have is the scars to remind you of that pain. i stillhave all my scar and all they do is remind me of the past .a past i dont want to remember. so if you want to talk my msn is redneck_6920@hotmail.com
    i'm here for you if you ever need to talk

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This poem was pretty good. I just didn't like the fact that the first two lines are from the song Hurt [Nine Inch Nails or Johnny Cash].

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    i really loved that poem although it was so sad. it was really well written. take care, love hannah xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    I like this poem because it's so simple but that makes it mysterious at the same time, I really love it. I hope you're okay, if u need to talk e-mail me at just_me3452000@yahoo.com, I'll always be here for you, even if you don't know me very well. Beautiful poem.
    Luv always, KT

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