Guilty Murder

by tubabassking   Apr 14, 2005


I saw you throw away your life,
When you went and bloodied the knife,
Taking her spirit when she said no,
Opening her flesh creating blood flow.

I saw you run and hide away,
And think of what you did that day,
You took your own life out of grief,
Throwing yourself to live in the Coral Reef.

I saw your soul rise from the grave,
You tried for heaven and the evernal rave,
But you fell short of the glory of God,
He sent you away with a single nod.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Okay i'll be honest with you....this is'nt a bad poem at all.....if you just check your mistakes and secondly....I would love you to expand on it....I think you've got quite a good poem that just needs a little TLC....trust me it will be great.

    Take care, Lis

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Interesting. I don't really know what to say, I guess I liked this poem.
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    heyy interesting stuff...keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I thought u did a really good job on this poem! It was unique and flowed well. Look forward to reading more of your poems! Keep posting! If u get a chance would u check out a couple of my most recent ones. I would really appreciate it! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    You took your own life our of grief,

    'our of grief' ?? was it meant to be hour or our, sorry didn't quite get this part. Apart from that it was a really good poem, had nice flow and rhyming.

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