You took your own life our of grief,

'our of grief' ?? was it meant to be hour or our, sorry didn't quite get this part. Apart from that it was a really good poem, had nice flow and rhyming.

I thought u did a really good job on this poem! It was unique and flowed well. Look forward to reading more of your poems! Keep posting! If u get a chance would u check out a couple of my most recent ones. I would really appreciate it! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

heyy interesting stuff...keep writing

Interesting. I don't really know what to say, I guess I liked this poem.
Satuxxa

Okay i'll be honest with you....this is'nt a bad poem at all.....if you just check your mistakes and secondly....I would love you to expand on it....I think you've got quite a good poem that just needs a little TLC....trust me it will be great.

Take care, Lis