by Antonia Apr 14, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I am the angel of dreams, I come in your sleep and even in your dreams. I am the the angel who tells you the truth when the others just laugh at you. I am your friend and the only one you really have, I listen to you and your thoughts but when I talk to you just walk away because you cant handle the truth that i must tell to you today. When I haunt you and your dreams you get mad at me, but you know what i can no longer be nice, I must be mean,cruel and rude. You either listen to me now or you will see that my last breath wasnt wasted by me but just you . I have always been the only one you had and the only thing you will ever have, so I make peace with you and hopefully you did listen to me while i last |
Interesting!! Great Job!! Again i would put it into stanzas it makes it easier to read and i think it gives it a little more effect to your poem!! Just a suggestion!! I like the way you write your poems (non rhyming) usually i dont!!! 4/5!!! |