Another Great poem!
You have a lot of talent!!
xx Keep it up xx

wow excellent poem! Sorry ive not commented earlier but comps been messin up!!! brill poem with such emotion...espec liked the line ...deathly dreams sing through her mind...thought it was really great
take care
xxxLoUxxx

Excellent, probably one of your best! The chorus-like change of rhythm worked so well. ooo maybe you could make it into a song?? Your imagery in your work just keeps on getting more and more imaginative..beautiful x

that's really powerful stuff, i havent read your poems in a while cos i aint been on this site recently but they are all just so consistently good. keep it up xXx