Don't hurt yourself

by Switchblade89   Apr 14, 2005


Dont feel like you have to go up high,
and leave this life without a goodbye,
you have more friends than you think,
just look,don't be blinded by your blink,
the blink that releases the tears you cry,
the crying tears you cry for thinking your life is all awry,
don't believe it has to be that way,
but if you must,I will hold the tray,
the tray that catches you're crying tears,
the tears you cry for unknown fears,

Please understand that I do care,
and understand that life isn't always going to be fair,
live your life and enjoy it too,
just don't hurt yourself,thats all I ask from you,

This was to my Friends friend who tried to commit suicide by jumping off the school roof.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    OMG...is that so...how is he/she doing now...is she/he still alive...based on the poem...I think he/she is...so...very good Robert...as always...

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    and thanks for the comment.
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    great poem robert. I loved it.
    keep writing.

    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by writer girl

    you are going on my favorits list. that was a really good poem.

    -kk-

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    That's interesting...I have a friend who's friend tried to commit suicide by doing the same thing. It's really upsetting to hear about those kinds of situations. I hope your friend and friend's friend are doing okay.

    I love the way you used the tears and blink...you said everything without a lengthy poem. You got it just right. Lovely.

    xxx

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