Love your poem esp the start. I really really love the start. Its amazing. Good work!

I Liked It Good Job 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

thanx for commenting on my poem i really appreciate it, i really like this poem, its really good to write what u feel...even if it is confusing

sorry i didnt mean your poem was confusing i ment even if your feelings are confusing...sorry

wow, i am really speechless. that poem was written so well, the words were put together really good, it was perfect. i loved it, one of my favs :) xxxx

It's great! keep Writing! Hey, thanks for commenting on one of my poems!

Girl, this poem is amazing. Check out mine if you have time. I love this one though. Well done.
- shell

OOO! Hun! i hope you feel better soon! This was a great poem though, it flowed so well! Keep up the great work!

Wow- very good ur a very powerful writer

'Tiss very good but so sad. There's so emotion in the poem, keep writing, you're pretty good..

wow? nice poem i tell ya that

Great, great poem. You have a long ways to go with the punctuation, capitalization, spelling...Etc...But even with that gigantic overshadow it's still a great poem.

hey....it was really good!! you have a talen!
-amanda

You seriously have so much talent, im really jealous. Well done again!! x.

Omg, take that f'ing pain away!!!!! Forget about it!!! There's always tomorrow, and I would break out in song on any other occasion, but this is not it. lol. So stay incredible, hold tight....uh...i gtg, I smell popcorn!! I GTG!!! I LOVE YOU LOTS< I LOVED ITT SOO MUCH!! SO sorry you feel sad though. You deserve so much more!!!

Love always!

~Sierra

thats good i'm a lil confused but i still like it good work! luv sam xox

thankyou for ur comments, its very much appreciated :D
xxx

Hey hun, you asked me on the discussion board to comment on this poem...But i already have lol. Dont worry though...Its a fantastic poem anyhow, well done. xx

hey there! Ive actually already commented on this poem, but i can say it again. Very good poem, the flow was so good! You are talented, só keep writing.
Satuxxa

Nice job, maybe you should read my poem, No more pain, it could help a bit. 5/5