its a really good poem and i like how you depict the idea of 'Hope'

However,you can take out the '....' in the poems, and try to neaten it up abit by writing euwal syllable counts.

Great poem though. i really enjoyed reading it but just a minor improvement here and there will make it into a much greater poem.

My personal favourite of yours - I love the imagery of hope being a game that children play in the night - now that is a powerful statement xx