by Just Lucy
ohhhhh, r u ok??? |
I hope your okay... Excellent poem. 5/5... I always enjoy reading your poetry it makes me think and i like that. Well i hope you are okay I'm here for you if you need someone to talk to anytime just email me. Take care and keep writing |
by ?
Really good poem, sad but beautiful, I loved the line 'A torture that only shows, internally.' I can really understand them, keep it up xxx |
by Broken Tears
I liked your poem. its not like most. great job. It rocked! And thx for commenting on my new poem! |
by casey
Wow! its amazing! great peom! theres nuttin that you should change in this! it all fits together perfectly and the emotion and depth really shows! 5/5! |
by Cimara
Beautifully written! your choice of words were amazing. hope you're coping okay..take care! xox |