Comments : Emerging Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    ohhhhh, r u ok???
    if you need anyone to talk to just email me on blue_kittykat_@hotmail.com, I am always here, and i really loved your poem, it was really good, 5/5 for sure and i have added you to my favourites!!! keep it up

    Well Lotta Luv
    *LuCy*

  • 19 years ago

    by Confused Angel

    I hope your okay... Excellent poem. 5/5... I always enjoy reading your poetry it makes me think and i like that. Well i hope you are okay I'm here for you if you need someone to talk to anytime just email me. Take care and keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Really good poem, sad but beautiful, I loved the line 'A torture that only shows, internally.' I can really understand them, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Tears

    I liked your poem. its not like most. great job. It rocked! And thx for commenting on my new poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by casey

    Wow! its amazing! great peom! theres nuttin that you should change in this! it all fits together perfectly and the emotion and depth really shows! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cimara

    Beautifully written! your choice of words were amazing. hope you're coping okay..take care! xox