She Is (Anatomy Of My Mental)

by CinnamonTwirl   Apr 14, 2005


Shes what others say
Others do
Others want
Other need

She can be...
Be all things
To all people
At all times

But shes dying
In her mind
In her heart
In her soul

Because shes deceptive
Craves attention
Craving love
Craving worth

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*I haven\'t written in like...a trillion years because SO many things have been going on. My best friend, both of her parents were killed last week. But anyways, this is basically about how I don\'t have a personality of my own because I rely on the feedback of others, I wanna write another poem about the same thing later once I get my stuff together. Thanks *

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ria

    This is nice although it looks as if it has been written too fast!!I say it's a four from me, you can do better!!!:)

  • 19 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    Thanks again everyone, but I think Sarah Jane quoted a poem that isnt even mine...nice job dummy...wow, that was REALLY dumb. And to everyone else who ACTUALLY READ it...thankx. I will be reading your works as soon as i get back from the mall (shallow i know, but i need to start lookin for prom) Luv you all!! -Katrina aka CinnamonTwirl

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This is a great poem. Short and simple, but that's is one of the goods things about it. Few words, but a lot of emotion and meaning. Great job.

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Sorry about your friends parents but you did a great job with this poem...I really like this the only thing you could change is put a s at the end of Other need...Great work hun
    Xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    good poem i know the feeling too its hard to appeal to everyone though... you jus gotta keep your poems from the heart great job

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