this is honestly one of the best poems on this site. the structure is simple, the flow is easy, and the theme is easy to relate to. i know how you feel, sometimes finding yourself becoming a mixture of all parts of your environment. poems like this remind me of why i come to this website.

if i could, id vote 341/5
but i cant, so 5/5 it is

well i really thought it was great, im going to add you to my favourites and wait for you to submit that other one, keep up the good writing, 5/5 definately, please keepw riting!!!

Luv Always
*Lucy*

Well if u haven't written in awhile u sure did a great job! It was an amazing poem. Short and very well written! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

thank you chad, that was one of the nicest comments i've gotten on my poems yet. Lucy, thanks for adding my to your favs, and Brooke, well its been like a month and half. As of now Im workin on writing poems that dont rhyme, well actually I'm just writing what come to me. Thanks everyone!!! I love you all.

dieing shoudl be dying; other than that, nice poem....perhaps you should read my poem "that woman", they are somewhat alike.

Anyway, 4/5. Good job.

here I am, giving you spelling corrections whilst I mispell should. Jeez.

good poem i know the feeling too its hard to appeal to everyone though... you jus gotta keep your poems from the heart great job

Sorry about your friends parents but you did a great job with this poem...I really like this the only thing you could change is put a s at the end of Other need...Great work hun
Xox Sherrie

This is a great poem. Short and simple, but that's is one of the goods things about it. Few words, but a lot of emotion and meaning. Great job.

Love,
Tiff

Thanks again everyone, but I think Sarah Jane quoted a poem that isnt even mine...nice job dummy...wow, that was REALLY dumb. And to everyone else who ACTUALLY READ it...thankx. I will be reading your works as soon as i get back from the mall (shallow i know, but i need to start lookin for prom) Luv you all!! -Katrina aka CinnamonTwirl

This is nice although it looks as if it has been written too fast!!I say it's a four from me, you can do better!!!:)