Comments : Not So Happy Ending

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, Sierra. very well done.
    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

  • wow!
    this is so well... beautiful
    i guess becuz i can relate
    this is so well written! i mean it i love this poem! it flows really well and its just an over all fantastic poem!!
    wow this is awsome you are so talented! loved every word!!!!

    >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Great rhythm...the rhyming really worked well...I kept thinking it was the end but it kept going for a few stanzas...beautiful work.

    xxx