although it confused me too lol...i really liked it...i like the way u wrote it and how u started every line with the last word from each sentence...i like that...very good 5/5...and keep it up!!
~*~yasmin~*~

wow thats really good, a lil confusin but i think thats just me, thanks for your comment, means alot to me :)
great poem, keep up the good work!
xxxx

Wow, Your peom is simple but yet it is also one full of feelings and even if you did not know what you were writing about, it came out in a very simplistically complex way and i give you mad props for this one.

awesome poem babe!! once again, your an awesome writer. great job!