DARK ANGEL

by ~DarkAngel~   Apr 15, 2005


Once upon a time
When the world was dark and gray
A little girl sat crying
Like she had alot that day

Her tears, they fell like raindrops
That had never left the sky
And as she let them flow away
Her life began to die

The reason she had done this
Was not that she was bored
She couldn't understand this thing
That wasn't of the lords

A dark angel came before her
And took away her soul
And so she sat there dying
Cause her body was not whole

Depression slowly ate her
Feasting on her fear
Till she was almost certain
She could shed no lonely tear

She finally had enough of this
And left her mind to fight
She was almost gone by then
But there was still some light

While she raised the blade again
There were no tears to shed
Dark angel took her over
And once again she bled

The deeper the blade went in
The more she began to bleed
Then a voice in her head told
" For this there is no need "

A flash was sent before her
Dark angel gave a start
A warm feeling swelled inside her
And opened up her heart

An angel stood before her
But she was very warm
" This angel brang you sadness
But with me there is no harm "

This angel took her by the hand
It was warm and nice
Girl noticed this angel's touch
Wasn't cold like ice

A great battle then took place
Of angels good and bad
The girl cheered on god's angel
Then ,won.. she finally had

The sky cleared up that day
And returned it's normal state
The girl then turned to angel
" You were almost to late "

Girl gave angel a giant hug
And shed a happy tear
No more living with that
Depression hate and fear

The girl then talked to god
And every night she prayed
That all dark angels living
Would very soon be slayed

The girl remembered angel
In times that were all gray
Angel would always come
To this very day

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  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey, not bad at all. Before I came to this site, I hated grammar and never paid any attention to it; however, it seems to kick my in the face everytime there's even the slightest grammatical error in something. So, don't take this the wrong way - as it does not change my opinion of the poem, I just thought I'd share with you the correct spelling of this word here:

    Was not that she was "board"

    as you have it now, it spells the object kind of board - and I sincerely hope that this girl didn't turn herself into a board at any time... Anyway, you may want to change the word to ''bored''. But like I said, it's not a big deal.
    Other than that tiny little thing there, this was a really good poem. I liked how you kept the girl nameless and still found a way to create and tell a meaningful story. Well done :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    I'm going to give this poem a 5 because it was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for posting it. Also, read my "Dark Angel" poem as well. Thanks.

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    aww thats really great!! i loved it....keep it up =)....take care ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

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