aww thats really great!! i loved it....keep it up =)....take care ~much love~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

I'm going to give this poem a 5 because it was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for posting it. Also, read my "Dark Angel" poem as well. Thanks.

Hey, not bad at all. Before I came to this site, I hated grammar and never paid any attention to it; however, it seems to kick my in the face everytime there's even the slightest grammatical error in something. So, don't take this the wrong way - as it does not change my opinion of the poem, I just thought I'd share with you the correct spelling of this word here:

Was not that she was "board"

as you have it now, it spells the object kind of board - and I sincerely hope that this girl didn't turn herself into a board at any time... Anyway, you may want to change the word to ''bored''. But like I said, it's not a big deal.
Other than that tiny little thing there, this was a really good poem. I liked how you kept the girl nameless and still found a way to create and tell a meaningful story. Well done :)