Bloody Tears

Actually knew nothing about this site until a friend of mine shared this poem on our FB page...which I help administer for fun...(when we made up she told me it was a poem from this site)...I'm a songwriter and she is my sweetheart....during an argument...I thought she was feeling this way...and made up these words and was so amazed at how easily I put guitar to it...I thought it would be a fantastic song..to help those who like to cut..(not a good thing)...I worked out the song...and would really like permission to collaborate on this...Not sure if I'm stepping over any boundaries here...I've been a writer on sound cloud for 2 years now...and I understand a lot about following rules...I think these lyrics are laid out brilliantly...with a few minor changes and a hook added...would be awesome...its an older poem...so, I'll hope the author is still active on this internet,,,

"my tears flow from my veins"

what a fantastic line- such a strange and vivid image and one that captures all u have to express perfectly. brilliant. the first few lines of this poem reminded me a little of my poem 'the doll' if you get chance to check it out. takecare. ur now firmly added to my favourites! x

This is exactly how i feel a lot of the time n u have just expressed that perfectly, well done

Oh wow i mean omg!! this has got to be the best poem i have read on here.. i would vote this 5/5 100 times its so freaking good!!!!!!!! im amazed

Cry...but not enough to waiste your gift for writting