Murder I Wrote

by Hina   Apr 15, 2005


Murder I Wrote

A Murder SHE wrote
Was a theory in my mind
A Murder I wrote
Was something more Divine

A Murder SHE wrote
Was for a moment in Funeral
A Murder I wrote
Would last the world eternal

A Murder SHE wrote
was forgotten the day of Light
A Murder I wrote
Will be remembered from Fright

A murder she wrote
was for me, a dying Man
The Murder I wrote
Well, I’ll kill her when I can

The Murder She Wrote
Was Forgotten When she died
The Murder I wrote,
Was in her bedroom
Last night…

( Im not a killer...I just wanted to think from a murderer\'s mind)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Great poem, dear!
    However, the line
    " Will be remembered from fright",
    Shouldn't it be
    "Will be remembered with fright"
    To me it sounds better this way, just a suggestion though.

    BTW, a very fine write. Love the innovative form and flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I really enjoyed reading this one. I liked the way that it switched between people and how it incorperated both of them. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 19 years ago

    by They Call Me Megan

    I love the perspective. And I love how people will think your some masked murderer. =) 'Tis excellent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    this is really good. very haunting.

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