aww great poem xxxx

GREAT! I THOUGHT SHE WAS REALLY THERE! KEEP IT UP 5/5

that was bad ass!!!! wish i was the chick in ur dream!!

omg i loved that..wow..that was amazing..a 5/5!!

i think you are such an excellent writer. that was so hot. keep it up!!

haha just like every one else, i'll say its excellent! wow..that was really sexy, i wish there was a guy like you closer to me >.< great poem, it was HOT.

OoOh KiNkY!!! I liked it,lol... Great poem ummm very descriptive and well written 5

Excellent. Very well written, I thought the girl was really there and it wasn't a dream. =) Keep up the good work! 5/5.

Nice One.

Failed

Wow, that is very impressive. Excellent job. >3jess

This is a amazing poem i loved it so keep up the good work
luv sam xxx

That was very good. OMG, That was so sweet. Great Job Timothy

Natalie,15,TX

WOW this poem is amazing!!!so well written....i can almost feel everything u describe...lol...i love it!!!*5/5*
~*~yasmin~*~

holy sh** lol. that was pretty much the sexiest poem i read. because its not just about sex but intimacy as well, and thats the best kind. awesome. 5/5
~Freak~

Wow that was very hot!! I have one suggestion at the beginning don't let the reader know it's a dream then when they get to the end it's a total surprise. The poem flowed beautiful and the detail was perfect! Take Care! Brooke~

THAT WAS HOT!!! Holy shit! I have to go call my boyfriend, I miss him now!

Sexy

Very good poem. The wording was perfect. I gave it a 5/5.

Very cute. The end is sad. but i liked it!