Not just a smile

You walk right past and see a girl,
a smile, a tie, and not a care in the world.
But look beneath the smile itself,
and find a girl struggling for help.
She's scared, She's lonely,
She's tugging and pulling,
on life's hurtful truth,
When she screams she breaks
her bubble around her,
but yet not a soul has found her.

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