Do I Dare? (triolet)

by Heather M Craig   Apr 15, 2005


Do I dare disturb the universe?
I shall not escape the shadows!
Do I dare fight the reticent soul and converse?
Do I dare disturb the universe?
I shall not survive the worse!
Do I dare allow my emotions to grow?
Do I dare disturb the universe?
I shall not escape the shadows!

Heather M Craig

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    I really miss your poems and your comments Heather. This is a lovely Triolet, good work keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    wow! amazing! you love those cool styles that i don't understand!!! he he
    great one
    5!
    Sammi xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I liked the poem, i didn't really like the format. I was never a person for this type of format and i never really liked how it repeated itself in such a short time, i feel you can express yourself a lot more with more lines to work with.

    I gave it a five/five.

    Love you Lots,
    Shaun Aka Dark Savior

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written.... It's prob one of the first triolets I've read that was put together so well... Def a 5/5 (take care) xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Nice Heather!!! I can't do all those different types of poems...I have tried and I get too damn frustrated! LoL Nice write....:) Hope all is well...Take care...5/5

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