by VampyraKi†Apr 15, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Please any comments are welcomed with open arms |
by †Undone♥
Oh, this is so cool! I loved it so much! But if you do really hate your father, maybe you should talk to him about it? |
by Allison
I really enjoyed reading that, but what can i say, I love vampires. You have a lot of talent and are a great writer. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more. *5/5* |
pretty good |
by Ashli
good! keep it up! |
by Carmen
the last stanza was kinda not great because it was different from the rest of the poem. otherwise, it was great |