I really like this one!! 5 stars! please check out my poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" thanks a lot.. hugs

5/5! Good poem!

You have an amazing talent with expressing your heart and feelings into words. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts.

~*~Christina~*~

really sweet poem, heartfelt, descriptive and well written

keep it up

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this is very pretty! the flow was good...nice job! 5/5

Aww.. i like this one alot :) keep up the wonderful writing :) 5!

i love this!its so sweet

Awwl.. this one's great.. the first stanza reminded me soo much of me n my b/f because he has dark brown eyes too lol. But Jarett must really love you! i hope u last a long time.. and great writing!

The rhyming was alittle off at the end, but I did love the poem, it was beautifully written and it shows how much you love Jarret. Keep up the amazing work! xX

The rhyme wasn't bad, kind of sing songy though.

some of the words need alot of revision but all it was a ok poem, I think if you really looked through this you would see the mistakes but we all make them so don't worry just keep writing. Take care...

Great poem

I liked this poem alot also...it was simple and smooth...keep it up...and thank you for the commenting and votes on my poems...it means alot...l8r, jen

Awww i liked it but it was like kinda off with some things but hey i mean this is a love poem and all poems come from the heart or something because if not then this poem would've sucked which it didn't you an amazing job on this. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

That was a lovely heartfelt poem, Whilst reading I could feel your emotion in the poem and your regret for hurting him, You are very lucky to have them and it shows you feel that, they are also lucky to have you.. I enjoyed this poem, the format and structure were fine, the rhyming didn't come across as too forced, all in all a good poem, one spelling problem.. "You stayed threw everything" should be "through everything" but thats just nit picking, well done

Very sweet poem. I loved it!

Hey thanks for the spelling mistake i dont think no one else seen it lol .. nice poem been there felt that. you lucky tohave some one like that. 5/5 nice write

Very sweet poem you must care about your boyfriend alot 5/5

I loved the love behind it, really, it was very deep and sweet of u, and Jarret would be wise to not break up with u.