awww. dats really sad. i dun htink its tru tho. no lying to rest jus yet k. good luck, keep up the grea work, i like ur style. :) smile bubba

great poem

Unloved ♥

A very touching poem.

You know where you went wrong and now you can make it right. So please my dear you must now fight......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Keep your chin up!!!!!!!! 5/5

Loosing Grip - You're right not just yet just had a shockingly emotionally draining week is all - thanks for your support

Dora - always welcome my Aussie Melbournian buddy :o)

Zypherex - Thanks for taking the time to give me your perspective my friend - as I mentioned earlier just had a shocker and writing helps me deal with my emotions - I'll have to check out your latest...

Thundersrose - Thanks my angel you really should take some of your advice darling - just like everyone else I have miserable days and today was just one of them - I would never leave Chelsey or my boys alone in this world under these circumstances - i know I have so much to live for, sometimes though you can't blame me for wondering why I bother though - its all good babes Im a soldier - always :o)

Angela and Unloved - Thanks :oP

Bert - Your words of wisdom are always welcome here my friend - thanking you kindly

=Eirisa=

:-O!!! I'm in so much tears right now..I swear I will beat every person who makes you feel the way you do Eirisa.. You are to much of a beautiful person and always quick to help people and I think people who make you feel that way are jealous...You are SO STRONG and my idol sis and nothing would be the same with you gone...I know life is a pain in the a s s but trust me....it will soon be better..Keep your head up sunshine...everything will be ok...
I love you sis forver and always
5/5
~Chelsey~

A little cliche... better than the average, but still cliche.

"About me they not doubt do feel the same."

I think you meant...

"About me they no doubt feel the same"

Either you simply made a mistake, or that sentence makes no sense at all.

Thanks Nobody an honest mistake I will edit accordingly - Thanks for your honesty and criticism :o)

Very nice poem! 50