5 stars for this one... keep it up.. please check out my poems! please comment/rate it would mean a lot.. thanks..!

Lol....cute...sorry your horse is such a brat! Lol.

interesting 5/5

short but sweet i love it
~Freak~

This is a cute poem and nice to read., But I think if you wanted to submit this work I would revise it . Personally I would reword alot of it but, then again that is me. I got it put it away and reread it in a year I think your work would be alot more better...

He did indeed almost kick me, but hey...I don't need that leg...do I? Perfect poem to the brat. :)

Hehe, it was cute..and I can picture the horse very well. Like Robert said, you could revise it, but other than that there's nothing wrong with it. Take care,
Dorotea

lol have u ever ridden him? good poem! keep it up!