This poem is very nice.... |
I really enjoyed ur poem....i think a good title for it would be "How Is It and What If" |
by Amy
WOW!! That's a GREAT poem!! Definitely one of my FAVORITES!! I agree totally with Brittany! You're SUCH an inspiration!! |
by Mariah
That is a very good poem. I couldn't think of a name though, if I do think of a name I'll tell u somehow. GREAT POEM |
by Annie
oh my god...that's beautiful. really. thats like...exactly how i feel. i love it. i really do. hmm...for a title...what about 'What If...?' keep writing...this poem alone shows that you have massive amounts of talent. i loved reading this...peace. |
by Angie
What If & How Is It? would be a great title. Beautiful poem, great job, loved it. |
by lindsey
aww that was beautiful..I loved it..It was excellent..your a good writer..keep writing..5/5 |
wow u have some serious talent i loved it! 5/5 and i loved the idea and the structure of it keep it up x x x x x |
oooo yeah n a title could be what if x x x |
everyone's saying the same thing...but no offense those titles seem boring...you should do something a little more unique...like "If we're not meant to be" but i get what you're saying in the poem...i mean I know that feeling...of not being able to move on...like the one who has my heart...wow...im like stuck in his heart...and I can't get out...and he's locked in mine...but we're not together...love's a crazy thing... |
by Cassandra
im just in awe of your poem i really think a good title could be... "this could b our last chance" |
by Dannie
Aww!!That's so sweet!!Ur a true romantic!! |
by Ashley
i agree with everyone else it should be named "What If" it is really a good poem. Love, Ashley |
Wow this poem is so great! You're a very talented writer. For a title you could try "How Can It Be?" Check out my poems if you get the chance thanks :) |
hey i read ur peom u should put the name as cant live with out you |
by Cierra
What if |
I love your poem...your well talented...well keep up all the good work |
by xxamberxx
Yea gud poem, i gave it 5 but i think 'How is it then' and 'What If' are WAY too original i think maybe you should call it 'A Feelings That Doesn't Die' OR ' Are We Meant To Be Apart' because both titles reflect the way you're feeling in this poem. xxx |
by xxamberxx
Feeling*.......thought I would correct my little mistake lol xxx |
by *Guerita*
wow... i loved it is slows so good and i understand is so well keep it up |