WOW!WOW!WOW! This is really good! It was beautiful, sad, and flowed so well! Keep up the good work! Your talented!

i liked this one a lot. i can somewhat understand how you feel. i have a few times wanted to die, but i'd never commit suicide. and everyone thinks your fine, when you couldn't be any worse. well, great job. 5/5

sweat should be sweet. Unless you were hot, and sticky. lol. Anyway, great poem. Very expressive...the words were filled w/ emotion.

4/5.

Moving and beautiful, i loved it and gave it 5

Great poem. I loved it. 5/5 I thought it was very heartfelt. Pretty good. Keep the passion.