Tell me Why?

by *Guerita*   Apr 16, 2005



So many times have I tried
To end all of my cries
To put a end to all this pain
Which no one seams to be able to explain
You know I've tried and that I would
If only my fears left I could
Where does the truth lie?
Because obviously not in your eyes
Why can’t you just hold me tight?
Why can’t you make things be all right?
Why do people always put me down?
Making me feel as if I where beneath ground
They always tend to stare
Without out a glare
Many times I have lost my will
And have decide to try and kill
Tell my why love hurts
Tell me why your feelings won’t burst

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  • 19 years ago

    by brittany uren

    wow this is a really great poem it sounds like me & the way i feel

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    this is really good and i am so sorry you feel that way

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I agree with tsekoden....Your poem needs something more....But great poem, just keep writing and try to make them a little longer!!! Just surgestiona, hope you don't get me wrong!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Wow seriously all your poems are about love or sadness. Why don't you write about something else? I mean there are so many things to write about in the world that why not pick another topic. To be honest, i'm getting tired of reading love poems and depressing or sad poems. How about a beautiful poem about nature? A sunset? Anything like that. Keep writing,
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I agree with tsekoden, It was good but not spectacular...I just felt like it missing something but good poems anyways i gave it 4

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