your poem was really great i loved it!

Great poem the rhyming flowed naturally without detracting from the poem. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems if you get bored (not many people have commented). Have a good day:-)

I can relate, good poem, stay strong!
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another great poem, short but filled with a lot of emotion, keep it up and stay strong always, lu -x-x-x-