freakin awsome poem. great. you have amazing talent in you.keep up this great job. hope that your ok? Much Luv

Nick

good poem. I feel sorry for you if you truly feel alone, I feel like that now and then, and i see it has a good thing sometime, cuz when people get close to me, they usaly get involved into things that might get them killed, so i constantly worry about my friends. well, good poem, by the way i apoligize again about the whole coment thing on Angel of love and hate, im sort of over it now, it still hurts. but i need to get along in life, theyd want me to, right? o i put a new comment on angel of love and hate, fyi.

Peace out, havic in,
Lance

this is so pretty such a good poem!!!!

wow this is deep!!! nice, i really like it.!

wow, this is such a wonderful poem! i never would have thought of a flower and personifying it. i like the part with it being tied to the ground or somthing like that. this was a great poem! stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16
ps: thanks for the comment on my "Broken Life" poem

an inspiring poem i found this to be,
a thing like it i didn't expect to see.

i speak for all when i say,
continue to write,
so in your poems we may delight...

awesome! so sad but written so beautifully!

hey...awesome poem..i love it...pretty kool...keep up girl.....well lates and take care...holla back girl....bye...

oh and umm... later i'll check ur other poems...cus is late righ now where i am...so anyways bye...and ummm....take care...bye...lates....

This poem was great, good rhymes and flow. A pleasure to read, good job.
Plz, check out mine when you have time, especially "From angel to demon" I really want ur opinion on that one, thx alot.
Keep up the good work and if u need to talk to someone u can e-mail me:)
Take care*hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

I love its originality. Great job on this one, and thanks for your comment. 5/5

~rolo

Very nice poem, dear. It's excellent. I love how you gave a flower your emotions. Very creative. 5/5

-Ice

Man, that was one of the best poems I have read in awhile on here! Seriously, it was not in prose, but there were many lines that compared you to the flower and it was so well put I got shivers! You deserved the 13 5's u have to date!

thank you so much for sharing this
victoria. I love your poems.
much love,
marjan

Interesting view. I don't know how you found it but isn't that the sign of talent? Nice poem. ;)

I can tell you why you write,,,it's a expression of gift, wanting to share and most of all it's you............

Please keep writing and spreading your ideals....At the same time compliment yourself..................

Shelby