Comments : Holding on

  • 19 years ago

    by Alex

    WOW! A little confusing, but it's really good. I say excellent! A 5 should do the job.

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    omGG....dat was so great well done Mwazii XOxox Stephy :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    hey there :D

    wiked poem

    rok on dude

    sarah xxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    This was awesome work:) Wow, there seriously are some wonderful talents in this site, especially young one..*No offense*..hehe.. Keep it up!! I really enjoyed it!! *5/5*

    oxoxo
    -x-Sedusha-x-
    Check on my poems if you get the chance!!

  • 19 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Awsome poems very transcendent Nice
    ~HazE

  • 19 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    and i can relate,
    on how much hate,
    that i had create.
    TRY CHANGING IT TO
    and i can relate,
    on how much hate,
    that i did create.
    {just a thought}
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Whisper

    That's amazing. My goodness. I'm speechless here. All I can say is I believe you have an amazing passion and you should stick with poetry. You're very good. 5/5. I don't know how else to tell you how amazed I am...Really Good

    ~Casey Jillian**