I like this one the best out of all of them. It really catches me. Good job!

Hey Jess,
this was a rlly good poem.. of coarse its not real.. u told me that its just a poem. its a rlly good one too... g2g love ya!
~*Amanda*~

Uh hi amanda...um...well I said it's not real, doesnt mean it isnt, at times I think it is...well I'm gunna go check out ur poems.
Ur sis,
Jess

i see some one voted you low cause you wrote a poem of feelings on suicide. this was good. like i said i love your poetry.. i vote you a 5!!! you are in my favorites and i look forward to reading more!!

Gr8 stuff,I'm sooooo relating to this rite now,even tho i kno I'll make it,This is just amazing.Respect.Peace Out -IIII

This is a very good poem! It is one of the best I have read. Alot of people write poems on suicide and most of them mean what they say. I have written one before and when I wrote it I was mad. Anyways Good Job!