Remembered Memories

by Rocky   Apr 16, 2005


Its been a year
Since ive shed a tear
All we did was fight
But never knowing who was right
Now that you are gone
My life can live on
Sometimes i see your face
From place to place

Day by day i look at the sky
And remembering the long goodbyes
Sometimes i remember the good times we shared
And the times be both cared
Our life was like a game
That could never be tame
So it wont ever be the same
Thanks for showing love
Like the white dove
I hope one day our path will cross
And realized what we have loss

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    i love it

  • 19 years ago

    by Waterlover4890

    Rocky that is beautiful. It's something that really touches my heart with a personal experience. Keep writing you have a great talent. 5/5

    Water

  • 19 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    aww! I love it! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Hailey

    That Was A Really Good Subject And If I Can offer A Little Tiny Bit Of Advice..find A POetry Struicture You Like..You Obviously Kep The RHming Goin But The Rhythm Needs A Structure Like A Four Verse Set out Or Something..I Just Thought It Was Such A terrific Poem And Had Such A Touching Sad Subject And It Deserves A Good Set out..Keep Writting..You Got It..Mwa Mwa.chke Out Mine If Ya Eva Get Da Chance lol And Give Me A Few Piotners Hehehe Cya

  • 19 years ago

    by amanda

    omg rocky.. this is like the best poem ever... it reminds me of my ex best friend... omg.. its so good......

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