omg rocky.. this is like the best poem ever... it reminds me of my ex best friend... omg.. its so good......

That Was A Really Good Subject And If I Can offer A Little Tiny Bit Of Advice..find A POetry Struicture You Like..You Obviously Kep The RHming Goin But The Rhythm Needs A Structure Like A Four Verse Set out Or Something..I Just Thought It Was Such A terrific Poem And Had Such A Touching Sad Subject And It Deserves A Good Set out..Keep Writting..You Got It..Mwa Mwa.chke Out Mine If Ya Eva Get Da Chance lol And Give Me A Few Piotners Hehehe Cya

aww! I love it! 5/5!

Rocky that is beautiful. It's something that really touches my heart with a personal experience. Keep writing you have a great talent. 5/5

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i love it