Jacklyn,

Such a sad story, I LOVED the ending, I think, perhaps this is your best one yet! the whole idea was amazing! 5

Love ya
Heather

Such a good poem! It flows nicely. Well written! Keep up the good work.

What a heartwrenching poem. Written so beautifully - constructed perfectly.
I loved every single second of this read. Take care always angel.

Love yew.
;;Kal.

That was so sad, amazingly written, sent chills down my spine! Keep it up!
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*sniff, sniff* Dang, LIL SLAM. *sniff* I have tears rollin all down my face. That was very touching. Tugged on my heartstrings. Very sad. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!! OMG...thank u 4 the comments plus the title, I SOOOOOOOOOOOOO appreciate it! I've been goin all thru my head tryna find a good title, but u just might help. :D Catcha l8r LIL SLAM (I like that nickname!) PEACE, BLESSNS, MUCH LUV.> ARI AKA SILENT ATTITUDE AKA SHADOWSHAWDY