by Alison Apr 17, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
There is this pain tearing apart my heart. I wish I had the feeling I felt in the start. When you were the one to brighten up my day, you were the one who made the pain go away. now you are the one who's causing it all, you were the one who made me fall. You were the one to make me cry, you were the reason I asked why? You were the one who gave me light, you were the one who caused me to smile when you were in sight. |
by allison
WOW! I like it I dont think u have to add anything to it itz good the way it is i can relate ...... |
by allison
very well it sounds like it came from the heart . is it ok if i give this poem to my X because that is how i feel? |
by Brittany Rae
that is very good... and even if your not finished.. that's great.. it just needs a ending |