Pain

by Alison   Apr 17, 2005


There is this pain tearing apart my heart. I wish I had the feeling I felt in the start. When you were the one to brighten up my day, you were the one who made the pain go away. now you are the one who's causing it all, you were the one who made me fall. You were the one to make me cry, you were the reason I asked why? You were the one who gave me light, you were the one who caused me to smile when you were in sight.

comment - haven't finished it yet . I'm working on it ? I'm entering this one to go into my school newspaper - so i have to do good .. tell me what you think

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  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    WOW! I like it I dont think u have to add anything to it itz good the way it is i can relate ......

  • 19 years ago

    by allison

    very well it sounds like it came from the heart . is it ok if i give this poem to my X because that is how i feel?

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany Rae

    that is very good... and even if your not finished.. that's great.. it just needs a ending