Comments : Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany Rae

    that is very good... and even if your not finished.. that's great.. it just needs a ending

  • 19 years ago

    by allison

    very well it sounds like it came from the heart . is it ok if i give this poem to my X because that is how i feel?

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    WOW! I like it I dont think u have to add anything to it itz good the way it is i can relate ......