Please Tell Me

by Robert   Apr 17, 2005


Place your trust in my hands you say,
then have the balls to let your eyes stray.
Telling me I have nothing to fear,
as you walk away with another woman switching into high gear.
Whispering in to her ears word of personal delight,
all the while keeping me away from your sight.
How can trust any words you say,
when you treat all women like your prey.
You do not say sorry for any actions or pain you inflict,
I just have to smile and come up with innocent verdict.
You play me like a fiddle every word designed to bring out your best,
but it is I that suffers from this unwanted test.
I fail every time I am in your arms and hold you gaze,
for I am not the true person with you, always lost in a haze.
I cry and tell myself I will not fall for your charms any more,
but when we are together your love makes me sore.
I can no longer live with you doing this to me,
can you feel my pain please just look and see.
I am baron a lost ship with no sail in an ocean of blue,
for there is no land or life with out you.
Feel my hand and wipe the tears from my face,
for my heart yearns so to be in your grace.
What more can I do to make you see is true,
my God do I have to spell it out I love you?
There I have given my best and my heart is in your hand,
for my sweet love please tell me where you take your stand.
I hope it’s with me by your side forever we shall be,
but please tell me soon for this pain is killing me.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the flow you created here with your choice of words .. it made the poem easier to read and more enjoyable. The message behind your words were deep and emotions I could relate with . Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I didn't really like it too much. I found it hard to read, due to a lack of punctuation. Try reading it aloud and placing commas or hypens where you pause in your reading. I think quite a bit of your rhyming sounds forced. I liked the emotion you put into this poem, but I just don't think it was enough to save it. 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem...it was different yet easy to relate too...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    Awesome,.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Ohhh i love this poem... i really do... it feels like you were angry and you wrote it perfectly. loved it! 5/5

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