nice poem i hope your others are as good

Another good job

awsome job please tell me how you do it?

HA HA HA HA HA!!!

is this a poem about how a girl left you for another girl?

that was surely a new one in my book.

Ohhh i love this poem... i really do... it feels like you were angry and you wrote it perfectly. loved it! 5/5

Awesome,.

Great poem...it was different yet easy to relate too...5/5

I didn't really like it too much. I found it hard to read, due to a lack of punctuation. Try reading it aloud and placing commas or hypens where you pause in your reading. I think quite a bit of your rhyming sounds forced. I liked the emotion you put into this poem, but I just don't think it was enough to save it. 3/5

I loved the flow you created here with your choice of words .. it made the poem easier to read and more enjoyable. The message behind your words were deep and emotions I could relate with . Well done *5/5*