by Robert Apr 17, 2005
category :
Internet slang /
life, society
White knuckles embrace the wheel of control, |
Great, i thought this was going to be a 'luvin dis laa' type lol but it was really well structured. xxx alex xxx |
by Jenni Marie
Oh how I love the imagery in this...simply breathtaking. |
by JustKristina
This one had amazing imagrary! wow! the rhyming again seem forced and i didn't like the structure of it.. maybe pick a different title? but overall very good poem!!! :o] |
This poem holds greatly described excitement, it held my attention from the first line. Very original piece, very descriptive and powerful. |
by Ashley Ann
Such imagery! You are an awesome poet! A lot of poems will bore me, but your poems capture my attention all the way through.. from start to stop. lol.. Fantabulous! 5/5 |