Glimpses

by Misstress   Apr 17, 2005


Just when I thought
I found the courage
To say what I feel,
You walk away..
Leaving me hopeless.
Again.

Just when I'm done
Thinking of you
You captivate me
With your smile..
And it hurts to know that
I'm not the one
You’re smiling for..

Just when I'm with
Somebody else’s arms..
You came to me and said..
How lucky is the girl
Standing right next to me..

Just when I've stop dreaming..
My dreams are coming true.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I really liked it, and agree with ~Living Dead Girl~ (Kalika), the lines "you captivate me" are really good, they fit so well with the rest. Keep writing, take care.
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    a very well written poem...I love the lines
    "You captivate me
    With your smile.." it's so sweet...I can relate so well to this poem....and thank you for commenting on my poem, means the world to me......keep strong....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by glenda

    ei i love this poem!!!!!!! i can relate to it!!!!! good luck!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    Cool. lol...No, this is a really good poem.